My Summer Holiday
Wow, in the holiday me and my church went to the beach because it was nearly school.So when we got there we had to set up the volley ball net and so we played then the mom’s was playing rugby.
Then we all got changed and went for a swim for 2 hours.Then we got changed and started to eat and then we played some activities for kids and then we had bbq for lunch and then we all went to the shower because we went for a swim again.
At last we all packed up and went home to sleep because we were going to my aunty house the next day to get our uniform.
Hi Francesca,
ReplyDeleteWell done for practicing your recount writing! It sounds like you had a really great time at the beach. Perhaps next time you could include a concluding statement about the event - such as: 'I had a wonderful time at the beach with my church, I can't wait to go back again soon!'