I am a Year 6 student at Glenbrae School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Miss Stone.
Hi Francesca,I like your piece of writing and the effort you put in it.I like how you described it professionally.I thought it was well presented and it is really good but maybe change the font...WELL DONE FRANCESCA!!! By Anita
Hi Francesca,I really loved the way you put capital letters and full stops. I like how you effort into your work. Make sure you put images or shapes into your work, but I really enjoyed it!!!Well done Francesca!