tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2721977450247370257.post6498291592939171003..comments2020-01-21T14:07:10.444+13:00Comments on Francesca P @ Glenbrae School: How to make sconesGlenbrae Blogshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16371474947404269992noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2721977450247370257.post-47067320941687930152017-08-17T17:08:25.019+12:002017-08-17T17:08:25.019+12:00Hi Francesca,
Ka pai! You were able to follow the...Hi Francesca,<br /><br />Ka pai! You were able to follow the structure of a procedural text on your own and you added detail to your sentences. Next time check to make sure that all of your sentences are complete and that they can be easily understood by your readers.Danni Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12705580027546152790noreply@blogger.com